A DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH the first draft Answer each questions with at least one sentence. Use your clusters to help you think of ideas COPY AND COMPLETE THE FOLLOWING SENTENCE AS YOUR TOPIC SENTENCE: My special place is ___________. OR The place I remember best is ____.My favorite place is the beach. DESCRIBE HOW YOUR PLACE LOOKS.The cold water splashes on the sticky sand. The birds dive through the water. DESCRIBE THE FIRST THING OR PERSON YOU SEE WHEN YOU ENTER YOUR PLACE.I see a lifeguard on a high stool. I also see people taking their dogs for walks along the shore. DESCRIBE TWO OTHER THINGS OR PEOPLE YOU SEE AT YOUR PLACE.There are little children playing in the sand. DESCRIBE ANY PARTICULAR SMELLS AT YOUR PLACE.It smells like sour fish and burned hot dogs on the barbeque. DESCRIBE ANY SOUNDS AT YOUR PLACE.I hear children splashing in the cold water and radios blasting rock and roll music. DESCRIBE ANY ACTIVITIES YOU DO AT YOUR PLACE I like to play in the cool wet water. DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL WHEN YOU'RE AT YOUR PLACE. When I get in the frozen water I feel excited!
